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Storms stir solemn sorrows
wrapped in thunderous lament
dark fronts blow across my heart
and stains my soul with torment
What bitter black winds do blow
and stir up this unending ache
that terrorize my existence
I long for gentle rains
that weep from the sky
gently washing away the horror
of my life, washing anew my limbs with
strength.
Freeing me from long torture, of my mental
state. But who sheds tears for those twisted
by such dark fates, as the mind tears
itself apart, and no one exists to hold
together spirit, soul, mind or heart.

Let the storms rage on, and rend what they may.
Soon nothing will be left but ruin and debris,
remnants of who, and what once was, me.
©2007-2009 ~Silverlion
:iconsilverlion:

Author's Comments

Feeling rather more down than normal.
So I write again.

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:iconsheslikeclockwork:
how amazing
i love your style

this is a great piece
i am so glad that there are still thoughtful, young authors out there
great work :clap:

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Of all the words of tongue and pen, the saddest are these- could have been.
:iconsilverlion:
I'm not sure I count as young anymore *LOL* ah well. I greatly appreciate the compliment on my writing.
:iconsheslikeclockwork:
haha sure thing
you really have some great work in your gallery
keep it up :D

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Of all the words of tongue and pen, the saddest are these- could have been.
:iconsilverlion:
Thank you very much. :D
:iconthirtysecondmirage:
ooo this is lovely. reminds me of some of the poetry i read in my classes. which is definately a compliment haha. are you getting big winter storms where you are too?

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"Ahh...music, a magic far beyond all we do here."
-Albus Dumbledore
:iconpinkflamingo14:
Beautiful like all your poems, I hope the gentle rain comes soon for you :hug:

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For such a big place it's a small world but anything goes still I got to say: Life has it's ups and downs but I love it anyway :heart:
:iconsilverlion:
Not much, no, just chill wind. That's about it.
:iconpinkflamingo14:
you're welcome :hug:

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For such a big place it's a small world but anything goes still I got to say: Life has it's ups and downs but I love it anyway :heart:

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